Shut up!

Time for my third critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>. Not that the other one aint good, but i have more to say that i think "BlahBlah109" forgot to mention

Lets look at the formal elements to start off with. The form is done very nicely. You captured her in this dynamic pose well! The proportion on it all is good, but can definitely be better. (eg length of her leg and fingers around gun.)

Colour has been applied very well and shows traits of form. Hair is done excellently, just love it. But I can't say the same for her dress, it needs more detail, tone and colour.

Her position is also good-leading the eye straight to her eyes. The tumultuous use of form keep my eye roamin' around form gun to eyes to body <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>.

Overall use of colour and medium to create tone and texture ain't bad.
Overall not to bad. Some parts, especially with regards to form and proportion can be fixed up. Nicely done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>!